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Thursday, March 05, 2009

So good it had to be shared

John Keats Eats His Porridge

It was hot enough to blister
The red paint of his mouth.
But if he let it lie there, glistening,
then clipped segments from the circumference,
it slid down like a soggy bobsleigh.

Grey as November, united as the kingdom,
but the longer he stared into that dish of porridge
the more clearly he traced
under the molten sugar
the outline of each flake of oatmeal.

When milk made its slow blue-tinted leap from jug to bowl
the porridge became an island.
John's spoon vibrated in his hand.
The island became a planet.
He made continents, he made seas.

This is strange porridge.
Eat it all up.

By Adrian Mitchell

6 Comments:

Blogger MissE said...

Oh that is cool!

3/06/2009 1:31 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Like all the best poetry, I don't understand it.

Did your creative writing group get up and running? Oh, and it was sad to hear about the layoffs at your work. I thought your job would be safe, since it's a pretty essential service :\

3/06/2009 4:00 AM  
Blogger colonel eggroll said...

MissE-I really liked it. Glad you did too! :)

mark-Yeah that does seem to be the case with all good poetry! LoL.

I did get my creative writing group going, and it has been so cool! I give out writing exercises every week, and it's really neat to see all the different ways people interpret them and what they come up with.

3/20/2009 1:35 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Sweet. Send me one of your exercises. Or post it on your site :)

3/22/2009 4:35 AM  
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